Black painted fingernails by Steven Herrick
Allen and Unwin, 2011. ISBN 9781742374598.
(Age 15+) Highly recommended Steven Herrick's book, Black painted
fingernails, makes a positive impression from the moment you first
spy
it with the intriguing, well-designed cover. I expected a verse novel
but this offering is written in prose. Still, there is the same
economical use of words that we find in his verse novels. The writing
is beautifully crafted with strong descriptive language; it is
perceptive, emotive and the words linger.
The story focuses on two main characters, James and Sophie. Each short
chapter features a particular character - James, Sophie, James' mother
Angela or James' father Michael. James is heading west for a temporary
teaching position in the country leaving behind anxious parents, who
have coddled him as their only child. Sophie has left a broken home,
where she grew up with a loving father and two brothers in difficult
circumstances at times. They have disparate personalities and lives,
yet we come to like each of them as individuals and marvel at their
developing relationship.
There is a keen sense of place in terms of micro and macro settings
with specific geographical locations in Sydney and country NSW. Place
names like Rose Bay and Hillston (central west) will be familiar to
locals. And there are several 2011 touches to the story eg with
references to iPod, voicemail.
Essentially this is a road trip novel with an innovative structure and
a love story with a difference. The story moves along well and should
appeal to a wide range of readers. There are some sexual and drug
references. I would like to see the use of the conditional tense as
appropriate, but this probably won't worry the target age group. It is
suitable for senior secondary students Years 10 and up.
Margaret Strickland