Killing Rachel by Anne Cassidy
The murder notebooks series. Bloomsbury, 2013. ISBN 9781408815519.
(Age 12+) When Rose receives a series of pleading messages from a
former friend, hurtful memories are aroused, prompting her to recall
a tormented friendship. Flashback episodes explain that Rose is
orphaned following the mysterious disappearance and presumed death
of her mother and her partner, both of whom were police working on
an important and secret case. Rose attended boarding school
following here bereavement and gradually became friends with Rachel,
a confusing and manipulative girl who delighted in melodrama and
attention.
After Rose learns of the drowning death of Rachel, a sense of guilt
and sorrow prompts her to revisit her old College, partly to
reconnect with staff and students, but also to try to understand the
circumstances of her estranged friend's passing. Joshua, whom Rose
considers a 'half brother' being the son of her late mother's
partner, drives her to the distant College, before detouring to
undertake his own investigation into matters relating to their
parents' disappearance.
Two separate mysteries are involved in this story, which is fine,
except that Cassidy assumes prior knowledge regarding the parents'
death from the previous book Dead time. The conveyance of the detail
to inform the reader is awkward and I think that a prologue
summarising the story to date would have worked more effectively
than trying to weave detail into the narrative, character's thoughts
and dialogue. Rose's jealous, romantic desire for Josh is an
uncomfortable incongruity, given the emphasis on her perception of
him as a half brother.
This is a good story when it comes together, however not much
involving Rose happens prior to page two hundred and I am not
confident that readers of 12 onwards to whom this is pitched will
have enough patience to get there. The pain and suffering of
adolescent friends quarrelling, reconciling and then destroying
their relationship is depicted beautifully, as are the volatile and
sometimes nasty aspects of adolescent girls' friendship groups and
exclusion practices.
The story is compelling as Rose and Josh stumble over clues about
their parents' demise and a remarkably coincidental connection with
Rachel can be forgiven in the context of the story line.
Whilst no extreme violence is depicted, thugs make some unpleasant
threats and the theme of people trafficking is referred to without
the exploitative details being discussed.
Rob Welsh